LOL, one of the thing AI isn't great at yet, understanding the details: "The Martian dust coated everything in Bethany's office, including the holographic display of market projections floating above her desk." Your holographic display is collecting dust!

Not bad, but the ending was a tad abrupt.

My take: I found the science on this one not completely plausible or consistent. I think the story was a bit generic. The writing was acceptable.