I found this intriguing,
How you deftly moved from the subject of dreams to the Ijele masquerade and then to the second dream and the unraveling six months later. And you seamlessly wove all these together to spark some curiosity about dreams & extra sensory perception.
Good stuff!
I also found it interesting realizing that this was not autobiographical,
means you have a fertile imagination.
You definitely should consider screenwriting
Yes!