Ann Handley, in the book "Everybody writes" introduces this concept of the "Ugly first draft". That I think matches closely what you propose here!
I will have to learn some of the data-analysis-based methods you use for getting insights on performance. As I currently don't do anything about that.
I really appreciate the insight of using data analysis. Thanks Miki Szeles
May I offer some feedback? I find it way easier to read shorter paragraphs, and I have seen that improvement in your writing! However there are three things that make it a little hard for me to read (because I have ADHD).
I think a good example of using bold letters effectively is when you retold the "mumbling on the street" story. As you only highlight the new changes, where you want the attention of the reader to go.
The single line paragraphs "blend" (I'm thinking that I may be slightly dyslexic) for me. So I get easily distracted before finishing the idea. The same for the conversations. Both long paragraphs and consecutive single-line paragraphs end up being very hard to read for me.
I can only say that those are issues for me. Again, I have ADHD and have a very hard time reading anything in the first place XD.
Finally, I am really loving your new approach to cover illustrations!