I didn't have time to read it yet. I must admit I can ba as bad and unfocused online user as everyone. I think the main reason I didn't read it immidiately is because it was so long.
However since it's different from normal stories, it's okay they are long, but maybe something can be done. One thing could be a few more images another thing I think could be good would be separate it with some kind of pagination so it will be easier what different topics are. If I'm going to read a long text for 10-15 minutes, it has to catch my attention almost spot on. Someones personal story unfortunately rarely does. Breaking it down more visible in topics might get my attention better on 1 topic and I might be interested in reading more after reading that topic.
Also I was wondering what the criterias for being an original person?